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Ohayoooo!!!! I need to do some new things on flash i think,omg...
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the background,the water,the "black thing" all these stuff was perfectly made.
But,i think that you could have done much better with the character drawing,and i dont mean it was ugly,it was really cool.
But from what i´ve seen before the character appeared i can tell that: YOU HAVE the talent to make this character perfect as everything else!
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Hey, thanks man, i think i understand what you mean ;)
The episode will be out in about a week so please review that too, i'd love to see what you think of that one in comparison ^_^
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Nice movie,and,well,i ever draw with a mouse,but just because i do not have enouth money for a tablet ehuheueheuh....but if you think tablets are worse than mouse i´ll belive you :)
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Amazing...uhum....uhum.....amazing
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with simple graphics but still amazing and it´s adicting also @________@
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Well.....A good idea,very creative,but,it´s still with too many bugs,i think you should try and try it again before submiting it.....
Good Luck anyway....
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what bugs?
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I did watch it a hundred times before notice it was a looping >.<
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Ok,i liked it,that is a good use of sprites and i think you should finish it...but....i also think you should look for some bad made things on it,try to see it many times,there is ever a new mistake to see,i know i could help you telling what i didn´t like but i can´t remenber any in expecial now...but anyway,good luck!!
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Oh God! I will be ready to die if i draw like this someday...
Anyway,i think it could be a nice thing to put a subtitles option to it,cuz i really could undestand more what´s happening on,i just hope to not be the only one with that problem >.<
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Hahaha,what more can i say?i love it!
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That was a good plataform tutorial,the best i saw i think,and i felt that i should make a game with your tutorial on the begining,but your game,the last example,have some problems,and i don´t know if you know how to to fix it but,but,if you do,it oculd be a nice thing to resolve it!!....
The problems are:
- On the sand ground,the char don´t stop just up it,just half of him appears,or,if you walk pressing down,he will do a small fall,even been in the ground and the he will appear just by half!
- If you click space to atack,or jump and at the same time try to move it,it will stay on the atacking,or jumping position and moving!!!
-u didn´t teached how to do the enemy walk by his own,but it moves a little when you are next to it,it should walk all the time!
Also u didn´t teached how to do it atack you!....
-Even in your game,the character don´t die,his energy just goes bellow 100 forever...
and etc..etc..
Conclusion: You did a good tutorial,but i din´t really teached us how to do a plataform game,just teached the little basic about it,not enough to do a real game....
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